Some questions that I have created while looking at this topic of
"accidental" deaths of alcohol poisoning or overdoses due to teens binge
drinking and / or mixing with drugs were...
1. What happened? (Must hear every side of the story.)
2. Who was involved in this situation?
3. Where did this happen?
Example 1. Party Hosts Fined in Teen's Alcohol-Related Death
http://www.cbc.ca/news/canada/manitoba/story/2011/11/29/mb-dauphin-party-death.html
In 2009, a 15-year-old girl named Tamara Aller froze had died from
alcohol. She froze to death in a parking lot. She was at a birthday
party where the hosts, Allan and Mary-Anne Kostur were serving alcohol.
Both him and his wife were fine to a huge amount of money. The party
consisted of 20 people and most of them were under the age of 18.
Apparently, "the Kosturs had purchased a case of beer for the party, but
guests — including Aller — brought beer, liqueurs and coolers as well."
(Section 2) After the party, Kostur had not ensured that the people
arrived home safely. In the end, Aller did not make it home, but froze
to death outside due to her being unconscious.
When reading this
article, it looked like the Kostur was at fault. Allan and Mary-Anne
Kostur were serving alcohol to minors. What was not mentioned was that
if they knew that most of the people were under the age of 18. Also, as a
parents and the hosts of a party, they should have taken responsibility
and knew better of serving alcohol anyways in the party. When driving
the two people back home, it was their responsibility to see if they got
home safe after heavily drinking. It is understandable, that they may
be able to answer questions or walk properly, but one may never know
when the person can become in danger. In my opinion, the sentencing for
the couple were too light, for a young teenager girl had died due to
their not responsible actions. The blame is to go to the parents that
hosted the party.
Example 2. Father Demands Answers About Teen Party Bus Death
http://www.cbc.ca/news/canada/british-columbia/story/2013/02/18/bc-party-bus-death.html
"A 16-year-old boy died on Friday in Surrey, B.C., while riding a party
bus..." (Paragraph 1) The article is mainly about the father who is in
shock and full of sadness that his son had died from underage drinking
in a bus. His son collapsed on the bus and could not wake up.
When
reading this article, it does not say who was to take the blame, but I
believed that it was everybody. Ernest Azoadam probably did not tell him
parents that he was going to go and party because he may have believed
that his parents would not let him go. The father did not know anything
what his son was doing outside late at night. Miscommunications between
the parents and Ernest Azoadam may have played a big role. Azoadam's
father mentioned that he did not know what a party bus was until this
tragic event. I understood then that parents may not have been educated
with these things. When reading the article, I thought that parents had
to be educated to know and understand what these things are. The party
bus came into playing a big issue as well. Did they not know that the
boy was 16 years of age? Don't they have security guards. The party bus
should be heavily asked questions as well as the people who were inside
the bus as well. The results of this event is unknown yet, but so far I
believe that the blame would be on the party bus.
Rebecca - Thinking like a lawyer - develop your questioning
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